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Skaman
03-14-2004, 05:16 PM
With the wide and readily availability of Hollywood productions, it is not uncommon that one could find instances and scenes of collective behavior evident in film. The portrayal of collective behavior and its accurate representation is what should interest most who are engaged in this specific field of study. The film Black Hawk Down in particular encompassed many relevancies to collective behavior, and proves to be an excellent model in the display of this group activity.

With relevancy in mind, the film pertains to the study of sociology for some obvious reasons: Individuals within the film act as a cohesive and collective whole, adopting characteristics underlined as preliminary actions in groups of collective behavior Such actions include the applicative mentality of mobs, gangs, violence, protest, conflict, and political unrest. These members are acting in a manner to establish and satisfy what they conceive to be a social norm. Those witnessing such acts are among those classified in the ‘barricades”, and can thus present a viable interpretation and analysis of collective behavior in action. The portrayal of these events can be associated with criminality and or political radicalism. A thorough examination of the event from various participants allows for a concise documentation.

Examining collective behavior, one is often ****e too many variables and problems which can alter or skew ones interpretation of such events. With the inclusion of multiple viewing participants, including and airborne observation unit, issues such as the ‘waterhole’ problem or viewing scope are not affected. While the events unfold very rapidly, many eyes covering the area allow for a thorough documentation. With the inclusion of multiple elements viewing the outbreak of mass collective behavior, one is constantly aware of the dependant variables shaping the conflict. Communication is readily sent to and from each observation element regarding the conflict and its current status.

The film respectively encompasses details and stereotypes common among the collective behavior movement. This movement is in particular fuelled by a mentality of hate and destruction, with emphasis on lawlessness. The crowd stereotypes are apparent, and evidently valid. The group acts in a manner of emotionality and spontaneity, leaving a wake of devastation and death. The group acts in an irrational manner, not cognizant of the ramifications and implications of their destructive behavior and the immediate danger they have presented for themselves, and those around them. These members fit the stereotype of being lower or working class, and in actuality, are indeed third world citizens of the underclass.

The actions presented by the crowd follow pattern within the structure of collective behavioral acts we have discussed in class. The idea of de-individualization occurs where the group gathers strengths in numbers and loses any inherent individual responsibility. There is a mental unity among the crowd where an unconscious sub strain and radical thought propels the group forward, almost stepping back into a barbaric ‘state of nature’. What must be acknowledged however is that the ideals of morality and contemporary social norms are in stark contrast to our own which may suggest the excessive radicalism in dealing with political threats. Additionally, the group is controlled by a “blind obedience”. The massive congregation is impulsive, and extremely mobile. There is no cease in the effort to create havoc and death aside from daily call to prayer in accordance to Islamic creed.

The indications and catalysts for casing group behavior are present as there is the preliminary factor: a large set of numbers. As well, an initiation or agitation occurs, in this case it is a challenge to political authority and an attempt to remove militant leaders among a loyal urban sector. Together, these actions all incline one to label such conduct as collective behavior.

The film itself has historical relevance and is set in Somalia in 1993 during a massive famine and international crisis. International units under the jurisdiction of the UN attempted to stabilize the nation and bring civil order. The most powerful warlord, Mohammed Ferrah Aidid seized food shipments and his people face an epidemic of starvation. US forces attempt to weaken his leadership infrastructure by removing key political officials, in-turn, a massive appraisal among the Somali populous results, creating conflict and violent outbreaks amongst the streets. As a result of the engagements, thousands of Somali’s are killed including several American and UN forces.

Attention of the film is place on General Garrison, a key member of “operation restore hope” and the command leader during the incident covered in the film. Emphasis is also put on the American special forces- ‘Delta Force” The film is presented in a chronological timeframe detailing the factors leading up to the conflict, then the largest component of the film covers the conflict itself, which spanned a total of two days in the capital Mogadishu. One point of view would not successfully encompass all events taking place, therefore the film alternates among various individuals in the conflict.

The film itself is presented in an extremely graphic yet realistic portrayal which proves effective in realizing the veracity of combat. The scenes of collective behavior generally remain consistent and do not change as the crowd is static and behaves in a particular action all throughout the film. The film itself seems to present the complications of a ‘political war’ and the complexities in dealing with a nation plagued with civil war and unrest. Ultimately, one could call it an ‘anti-war’ film.

The film was relevant to the study of collective behavior as a whole, yet it can be examined in a more narrow fashion. The Contagion Theory appears to be the most applicable to the film and the actions presented by the Somali mob. In accordance with the Social Contagion theory, the group appeals to the most violent members. This is clearly unmistakable as the group is driven by hate and an urge to inflict death. When a solider is killed, the mob behaves in a fashion one could not mistake for utter jubilation and pleasure. The frenzy of violence moves through the crowd like a virus, just as the contagion theory specifies. The group acts spontaneously, and in respect to the least intelligent member of the mob. Lebon’s ideal is clearly applicable as the group acts without reason, drawing strength from numbers, driven to kill. The members of the mob act in agreement, all individualism is suppressed, and they act in accordance with the expectations and beliefs. Park’s idea of contagion theory is also applicable, where the crowd is affected by its members causing a circular reaction. In addition, Blummer’s ideal can also be applied. The group acts in a way they would not normally represent themselves, but act in unison with the group as they seek security, and power. Acting in this manner and on their own would surely single them out. However, not all members act in conformity with the crowd, and some do in-fact run for cover or hide during the engagement. Clearly individuals are cognizant of external actions, and by interpreting these actions they act in a rational manner reminiscent of Blumner’s interpretative interaction theory.

Watching the film, one gains insight into the nature of political radicalism, and the damage it can sustain. The implications of war and American foreign policy are made aware. Additionally, one can interpret the film in a new light, applying theological thought of collective behavior, allowing for a better conceptual understanding of the conflict and its catalysts. Black Hawk Down can be used as an important tool for sociologists in the applicative studies of collective behavior, viewing the nature of this conduct in a live visual fashion. Watching the film, one must still remain open minded and be aware that we cannot label the mob as ruthless or immoral; rather we must understand the social norms present in the cultural setting. Therefore, we can gain much from this film if we do not allow racial prejudice, bias, or false pre-conception to cloud our judgment.



This is a rough copy and there are some kinks and sources need to be checked. Some names may be spelled wrong. Offer any advice.

Beowulf
03-14-2004, 05:26 PM
Looks interesting, I'll proofread it.

Skaman
03-14-2004, 05:35 PM
Looks interesting, I'll proofread it.

thanks

Beowulf
03-14-2004, 06:19 PM
With the wide and readily availability of Hollywood productions, it is not uncommon that one could find instances and scenes of collective behavior evident in film. The portrayal of collective behavior and its accurate representation is what should interest most who are engaged in this specific field of study. The film Black Hawk Down in particular encompassed many relevancies to collective behavior, and proves to be an excellent model in the display of this group activity.

Topic sentence, and thesis statement. Good. Would it be better to focus on the more factual book, rather than the film interpretation of the book?

With relevancy in mind, the film pertains to the study of sociology for some obvious reasons: Individuals within the film act as a cohesive and collective whole, comma splice adopting characteristics underlined as preliminary actions in groups of collective behavior. Such actions include the applicative mentality of mobs, gangs, violence, protest, conflict, and political unrest. These members are acting in a manner to establish and satisfy what they conceive to be a social norm. Those witnessing such acts are among those classified in the ‘barricades”, and can thus present a viable interpretation and analysis of collective behavior in action. The portrayal of these events can be associated with criminality and or political radicalism. A thorough examination of the event from various participants allows for a concise documentation.

You may want to say "While" at the beginning of this sentence. Examining collective behavior, one is often ****e too sp. many variables and problems which can alter or skew ones interpretation of such events. With the inclusion of multiple viewing participants, including and sp. airborne observation unit, This appositive may be unnecessary... issues such as the ‘waterhole’ problem or viewing scope are not affected. While the events unfold very rapidly, many eyes covering the area allow for a thorough documentation. With the inclusion of multiple elements viewing the outbreak of mass collective behavior, comma splice one is constantly aware of the dependant variables shaping the conflict. Communication is readily sent to and from each observation element regarding the conflict and its current status.

The film respectively <why do you have this word??encompasses details and stereotypes common among the collective behavior movement. This movement is "in particular" <why? fuelled sp. by a mentality of hate and destruction,comma splice with an emphasis on lawlessness. The crowd stereotypes are apparent, and evidently valid. The group acts in a manner of emotionality and spontaneity, leaving a wake of devastation and death. The group acts in an irrational manner, "not (in-)cognizant" of the ramifications and implications of their destructive behavior and the immediate danger they have presented for themselves, and those around them. These members fit the stereotype of being lower or working class, "and in actuality, are indeed" <-choose one or the other, either "in actuality "or "indeed" third world citizens of the underclass.

The actions presented by the crowd follow pattern(s) within the structure of collective behavioral acts we have discussed in class. The idea of de-individualization occurs where perhaps "when?" the group gathers strengths in numbers and loses any inherent individual responsibility. There is a mental unity among the crowd where (again, are you referring to a place?) an unconscious sub strain and radical thought propels the group forward, almost stepping back into a barbaric ‘state of nature’. What must be acknowledged however is that the ideals of morality and contemporary social norms are in stark contrast to our own which may suggest the excessive radicalism in dealing with political threats. Additionally, the group is controlled by a “blind obedience”. The massive congregation is impulsive, and extremely mobile. There is no cease in the effort to create havoc and death aside from daily call to prayer in accordance to Islamic creed.

The indications and catalysts for casing group behavior are present as there is the preliminary factor: a large set of numbers. As well, an initiation or agitation occurs, in this case it is a challenge to political authority and an attempt to remove militant leaders among a loyal urban sector. Together, these actions all incline one to label such conduct as collective behavior.

The film itself has historical relevance and is set in Somalia in 1993 during a massive famine and international crisis. International units under the jurisdiction of the UN attempted to stabilize the nation and bring civil order. The most powerful warlord, Mohammed Ferrah Aidid seized food shipments and his people face an epidemic of starvation. US forces attempt to weaken his leadership infrastructure by removing key political officials, in-turn, a massive appraisal among the Somali populous results, creating conflict and violent outbreaks amongst the streets. As a result of the engagements, thousands of Somali’s are killed including several American and UN forces.

Attention of the film is place on General Garrison, a key member of “operation restore hope” and the command leader during the incident covered in the film. Emphasis is also put on the American special forces- ‘Delta Force” The film is presented in a chronological timeframe detailing the factors leading up to the conflict, then the largest component of the film covers the conflict itself, which spanned a total of two days in the capital Mogadishu. One point of view would not successfully encompass all events taking place, therefore the film alternates among various individuals in the conflict.

The film itself is presented in an extremely graphic yet realistic portrayal which proves effective in realizing the veracity of combat. The scenes of collective behavior generally remain consistent and do not change as the crowd is static and behaves in a particular action all throughout the film. The film itself seems to present the complications of a ‘political war’ and the complexities in dealing with a nation plagued with civil war and unrest. Ultimately, one could call it an ‘anti-war’ film.

The film was relevant to the study of collective behavior as a whole, yet it can be examined in a more narrow fashion. The Contagion Theory appears to be the most applicable to the film and the actions presented by the Somali mob. In accordance with the Social Contagion theory, the group appeals to the most violent members. This is clearly unmistakable as the group is driven by hate and an urge to inflict death. When a solider is killed, the mob behaves in a fashion one could not mistake for utter jubilation and pleasure. The frenzy of violence moves through the crowd like a virus, just as the contagion theory specifies. The group acts spontaneously, and in respect to the least intelligent member of the mob. Lebon’s ideal is clearly applicable as the group acts without reason, drawing strength from numbers, driven to kill. The members of the mob act in agreement, all individualism is suppressed, and they act in accordance with the expectations and beliefs. Park’s idea of contagion theory is also applicable, where the crowd is affected by its members causing a circular reaction. In addition, Blummer’s ideal can also be applied. The group acts in a way they would not normally represent themselves, but act in unison with the group as they seek security, and power. Acting in this manner and on their own would surely single them out. However, not all members act in conformity with the crowd, and some do in-fact run for cover or hide during the engagement. Clearly individuals are cognizant of external actions, and by interpreting these actions they act in a rational manner reminiscent of Blumner’s interpretative interaction theory.

Watching the film, one gains insight into the nature of political radicalism, and the damage it can sustain. The implications of war and American foreign policy are made aware. Additionally, one can interpret the film in a new light, applying theological thought of collective behavior, allowing for a better conceptual understanding of the conflict and its catalysts. Black Hawk Down can be used as an important tool for sociologists in the applicative studies of collective behavior, viewing the nature of this conduct in a live visual fashion. Watching the film, one must still remain open minded and be aware that we cannot label the mob as ruthless or immoral; rather we must understand the social norms present in the cultural setting. Therefore, we can gain much from this film if we do not allow racial prejudice, bias, or false pre-conception to cloud our judgment.



This is a rough copy and there are some kinks and sources need to be checked. Some names may be spelled wrong. Offer any advice.

Grammar: My grammar proofreading skills aren't top notch, if something looked wrong I went ahead and noted it, but don't take my word for it.
I stopped checking grammar and spelling partway through. Not terribly important , but it adds up. Make sure you have an independent clause on ether side of a conjunction with a comma before the conjunction. Conjunctions: and, or, but, for, nor, yet, and so.

Don't rely on Microsoft word to proofread your papers. Make sure to cite your sources, using proper MLA style. (or whatever your prof wants)

Style: it's fine, but you need to focus on just proving your point. If your professor has a doctorate he/she will not be impressed by the usage of big words, and excesive modifiers. (especially dangling or misplaced modifiers!)

Content: Again. Just prove your thesis! No need to meander about. Your second paragraph seems like you're justifying the focus of your paper, trying to explain why it is relevant. Why? If your proofs are strong I'll know it's relevant. Focus on the standard "five paragraph"* form for essays and then let it grow from there.

*Intro (topic sentence, thesis statement) Proof 1, Proof 2, Proof 3, Conclusion. Should "read" kinda like this. "<--->"

Conclusion: You end up making an appeal against any type of value judgements??? Beware social/moral relativism! In your conclusion restate your thesis and proofs succintly. You're trying to convince me of something. I come away with a warning against value judgements against the somali mob, and not a proof that collective behavior is displayed in the film.

Question: Is collective behavior a completely mitigating factor in terms of moral behavior? Do mobs have carte blanche in terms of moral culpability?

That's all I got for now. I'm sure I made some mistakes especially in terms of grammar, and everyone reads a bit differently and focuses on different things.

Skaman
03-14-2004, 06:45 PM
With the wide and readily availability of Hollywood productions, it is not uncommon that one could find instances and scenes of collective behavior evident in film. The portrayal of collective behavior and its accurate representation is what should interest most who are engaged in this specific field of study. The film Black Hawk Down in particular encompassed many relevancies to collective behavior, and proves to be an excellent model in the display of this group activity.

Topic sentence, and thesis statement. Good. Would it be better to focus on the more factual book, rather than the film interpretation of the book?

With relevancy in mind, the film pertains to the study of sociology for some obvious reasons: Individuals within the film act as a cohesive and collective whole, comma splice adopting characteristics underlined as preliminary actions in groups of collective behavior. Such actions include the applicative mentality of mobs, gangs, violence, protest, conflict, and political unrest. These members are acting in a manner to establish and satisfy what they conceive to be a social norm. Those witnessing such acts are among those classified in the ‘barricades”, and can thus present a viable interpretation and analysis of collective behavior in action. The portrayal of these events can be associated with criminality and or political radicalism. A thorough examination of the event from various participants allows for a concise documentation.

You may want to say "While" at the beginning of this sentence. Examining collective behavior, one is often ****e too sp. many variables and problems which can alter or skew ones interpretation of such events. With the inclusion of multiple viewing participants, including and sp. airborne observation unit, This appositive may be unnecessary... issues such as the ‘waterhole’ problem or viewing scope are not affected. While the events unfold very rapidly, many eyes covering the area allow for a thorough documentation. With the inclusion of multiple elements viewing the outbreak of mass collective behavior, comma splice one is constantly aware of the dependant variables shaping the conflict. Communication is readily sent to and from each observation element regarding the conflict and its current status.

The film respectively <why do you have this word??encompasses details and stereotypes common among the collective behavior movement. This movement is "in particular" <why? fuelled sp. by a mentality of hate and destruction,comma splice with an emphasis on lawlessness. The crowd stereotypes are apparent, and evidently valid. The group acts in a manner of emotionality and spontaneity, leaving a wake of devastation and death. The group acts in an irrational manner, "not (in-)cognizant" of the ramifications and implications of their destructive behavior and the immediate danger they have presented for themselves, and those around them. These members fit the stereotype of being lower or working class, "and in actuality, are indeed" <-choose one or the other, either "in actuality "or "indeed" third world citizens of the underclass.

The actions presented by the crowd follow pattern(s) within the structure of collective behavioral acts we have discussed in class. The idea of de-individualization occurs where perhaps "when?" the group gathers strengths in numbers and loses any inherent individual responsibility. There is a mental unity among the crowd where (again, are you referring to a place?) an unconscious sub strain and radical thought propels the group forward, almost stepping back into a barbaric ‘state of nature’. What must be acknowledged however is that the ideals of morality and contemporary social norms are in stark contrast to our own which may suggest the excessive radicalism in dealing with political threats. Additionally, the group is controlled by a “blind obedience”. The massive congregation is impulsive, and extremely mobile. There is no cease in the effort to create havoc and death aside from daily call to prayer in accordance to Islamic creed.

The indications and catalysts for casing group behavior are present as there is the preliminary factor: a large set of numbers. As well, an initiation or agitation occurs, in this case it is a challenge to political authority and an attempt to remove militant leaders among a loyal urban sector. Together, these actions all incline one to label such conduct as collective behavior.

The film itself has historical relevance and is set in Somalia in 1993 during a massive famine and international crisis. International units under the jurisdiction of the UN attempted to stabilize the nation and bring civil order. The most powerful warlord, Mohammed Ferrah Aidid seized food shipments and his people face an epidemic of starvation. US forces attempt to weaken his leadership infrastructure by removing key political officials, in-turn, a massive appraisal among the Somali populous results, creating conflict and violent outbreaks amongst the streets. As a result of the engagements, thousands of Somali’s are killed including several American and UN forces.

Attention of the film is place on General Garrison, a key member of “operation restore hope” and the command leader during the incident covered in the film. Emphasis is also put on the American special forces- ‘Delta Force” The film is presented in a chronological timeframe detailing the factors leading up to the conflict, then the largest component of the film covers the conflict itself, which spanned a total of two days in the capital Mogadishu. One point of view would not successfully encompass all events taking place, therefore the film alternates among various individuals in the conflict.

The film itself is presented in an extremely graphic yet realistic portrayal which proves effective in realizing the veracity of combat. The scenes of collective behavior generally remain consistent and do not change as the crowd is static and behaves in a particular action all throughout the film. The film itself seems to present the complications of a ‘political war’ and the complexities in dealing with a nation plagued with civil war and unrest. Ultimately, one could call it an ‘anti-war’ film.

The film was relevant to the study of collective behavior as a whole, yet it can be examined in a more narrow fashion. The Contagion Theory appears to be the most applicable to the film and the actions presented by the Somali mob. In accordance with the Social Contagion theory, the group appeals to the most violent members. This is clearly unmistakable as the group is driven by hate and an urge to inflict death. When a solider is killed, the mob behaves in a fashion one could not mistake for utter jubilation and pleasure. The frenzy of violence moves through the crowd like a virus, just as the contagion theory specifies. The group acts spontaneously, and in respect to the least intelligent member of the mob. Lebon’s ideal is clearly applicable as the group acts without reason, drawing strength from numbers, driven to kill. The members of the mob act in agreement, all individualism is suppressed, and they act in accordance with the expectations and beliefs. Park’s idea of contagion theory is also applicable, where the crowd is affected by its members causing a circular reaction. In addition, Blummer’s ideal can also be applied. The group acts in a way they would not normally represent themselves, but act in unison with the group as they seek security, and power. Acting in this manner and on their own would surely single them out. However, not all members act in conformity with the crowd, and some do in-fact run for cover or hide during the engagement. Clearly individuals are cognizant of external actions, and by interpreting these actions they act in a rational manner reminiscent of Blumner’s interpretative interaction theory.

Watching the film, one gains insight into the nature of political radicalism, and the damage it can sustain. The implications of war and American foreign policy are made aware. Additionally, one can interpret the film in a new light, applying theological thought of collective behavior, allowing for a better conceptual understanding of the conflict and its catalysts. Black Hawk Down can be used as an important tool for sociologists in the applicative studies of collective behavior, viewing the nature of this conduct in a live visual fashion. Watching the film, one must still remain open minded and be aware that we cannot label the mob as ruthless or immoral; rather we must understand the social norms present in the cultural setting. Therefore, we can gain much from this film if we do not allow racial prejudice, bias, or false pre-conception to cloud our judgment.



This is a rough copy and there are some kinks and sources need to be checked. Some names may be spelled wrong. Offer any advice.

Grammar: My grammar proofreading skills aren't top notch, if something looked wrong I went ahead and noted it, but don't take my word for it.
I stopped checking grammar and spelling partway through. Not terribly important , but it adds up. Make sure you have an independent clause on ether side of a conjunction with a comma before the conjunction. Conjunctions: and, or, but, for, nor, yet, and so.

Don't rely on Microsoft word to proofread your papers. Make sure to cite your sources, using proper MLA style. (or whatever your prof wants)

Style: it's fine, but you need to focus on just proving your point. If your professor has a doctorate he/she will not be impressed by the usage of big words, and excesive modifiers. (especially dangling or misplaced modifiers!)

Content: Again. Just prove your thesis! No need to meander about. Your second paragraph seems like you're justifying the focus of your paper, trying to explain why it is relevant. Why? If your proofs are strong I'll know it's relevant. Focus on the standard "five paragraph"* form for essays and then let it grow from there.

*Intro (topic sentence, thesis statement) Proof 1, Proof 2, Proof 3, Conclusion. Should "read" kinda like this. "<--->"

Conclusion: You end up making an appeal against any type of value judgements??? Beware social/moral relativism! In your conclusion restate your thesis and proofs succintly. You're trying to convince me of something. I come away with a warning against value judgements against the somali mob, and not a proof that collective behavior is displayed in the film.

Question: Is collective behavior a completely mitigating factor in terms of moral behavior? Do mobs have carte blanche in terms of moral culpability?

That's all I got for now. I'm sure I made some mistakes especially in terms of grammar, and everyone reads a bit differently and focuses on different things.


I appreciate it. I picked up on some of the same things.

James
03-14-2004, 07:12 PM
Is it acceptable to use fiction as the basis for such a paper?

What was the actual assignement?

Just curious.

Skaman
03-14-2004, 08:00 PM
Is it acceptable to use fiction as the basis for such a paper?

What was the actual assignement?

Just curious.

yes, to observe collective behavior in a film. I picked BHD.

Seraphim
03-14-2004, 10:44 PM
You taking advice from Beo is like sleeping with the enemy isnt it? ;)

Give it to FG to proof read it.

Beowulf
03-15-2004, 01:12 AM
You taking advice from Beo is like sleeping with the enemy isnt it? ;)

Give it to FG to proof read it.
shhhhh, you're gonna ruin it.... :D

p.s. I'm drunk

WARPIG
03-15-2004, 07:29 AM
Good content on the sub. dicamus. I also found that the structure and grammar were taking away from the tempo. I have a feeling that you write as I do... without an outline. I have had to learn to write "freestyle" on the subject at hand.. then apply the appropriate template, and structure the paper. Then proofread and add final polish to make it seamless. I think your analysis seemed valid but didn't really feel convinced.

Good luck on the project my man.

Skaman
03-15-2004, 01:11 PM
Good content on the sub. dicamus. I also found that the structure and grammar were taking away from the tempo. I have a feeling that you write as I do... without an outline. I have had to learn to write "freestyle" on the subject at hand.. then apply the appropriate template, and structure the paper. Then proofread and add final polish to make it seamless. I think your analysis seemed valid but didn't really feel convinced.

Good luck on the project my man.


I tend to not create a thesis statement, rather one just develops naturally. If someone asked me the key to writing a proper paper, I would be of little help as I simply 'just write'. So far it has done me well and I will stick with it.


Thanks for the feedback

WARPIG
03-15-2004, 01:16 PM
If it works don't break it.

Keep some advice in your mind for the next professor though. Maybe freeflow writing won't wash with the next guy.

Keep em coming dicamus.. critiquing that kind of work is a great learning tool.

ßå$tĮТHÏ¿ð
03-15-2004, 03:11 PM
you got all that from a movie? was it divx :lol:

Skaman
03-15-2004, 03:28 PM
you got all that from a movie? was it divx :lol:


I just watched my dvd and the brain juices flowed. voila